Oh I loved this! Haha you already had a sequel :P I really liked this! It was sad though, poor Joey, that must have hurt to hear Kaiba say those things. :( I loved it though!

That's so sad... sweet but sad...

Yes and you need another short simple story/letter

Prey:

That was so sad! How MEAN R YOU!AH! IT WAAS A GOOD STORY AND ALL BUT SAD!

WA! Coley-chan you suck balls! Make me read this...and in the midst of my depression too! Gr!

But i still loved it and you know it...

Love,

Kari

Aww so sad. "get your things and get out" so mean Seto! I loved this story it was so awesome, you captured Jou's mood perfectly because that probably is what he would feel like after a break up with Kaiba. Anyway awesome story and you really should consider continuing (can't spell that) story. It has real potential. Also UPDATE CABIN FEVER DARN YOU! Sorry about that, awesome story and please continue it! Keep writing!

Great poem. I loved it.