GAH! I'm laughing my freaking ARMS off now! That was so great! I lvoed the part about Sean's neck and eyebrows, it's so true! THAT WAS GREAT! The first chapters were... eh... but then it got HILARIOUS!

Spectacular.

Worst story ever, besides Truth or Dare, how could I ever forget such **, wait, i'll be reminded by urs...hm...just give up on writing will ya, I definetly agree wiht Jack S.
What The Hell Were you thinking! And calling terri fat was not nice X( not cool Oyster **
>:( I'm glad u now know my hate for your story, well have a nice day muahahahhaha

This story sucks. Do you feel good about yourself when you write? I hope so, because that has to be the only reason you do it. Maybe you should take up a new hobby, like, oh I don't know... avoiding anything that has to do with writing at all costs?

WTF?! Why are you getting so many flames?! I adore this story. At first, I read the first two chaps and thought it was a horrible romance/drama. So I switched my mood for 'parady' and was laughing so hard! I love it, definitly keep up the awesome work!

What the hell?

OMG! That was hilarious. I love it. I'm adding it to my Favorites List. I seriously don't get why people are offended and flaming you. *sarcasm* Because in a serious story Ellie and Toby are together and Paige is a heroin addict (because she was raped) and Terri's name would be Terry "**" McEastalot. */end sarcasm*
Anyway...wow. I hope this was a parody. :)

Erm, don't know if you've seen the show or not...

Even though I know most of the kids in D:TNG change partners more often than square dancers, Toby loves Kendra (he stood up to SPINNER of all people!) and Ellie wouldn't be interested in a plain nice guy like Toby.

I could go on about your bastardization and overall direspect of the ever awesome Archie "Snake" Simpson in your other story but he's suffered enough already.

Watch the show first and then work on it some more.

that story was the weirdest story ever! i liked it! lol!

BOYF!? WTF MATE!?!?!?! YOU NEED TO GET SOMEZ WRIZITING LESSONS BEOTCH!11! AND YOU NEEDZZ MORE DETAILZZ AND SHOULDN'T CRAIGE BE PUNCHING JIMMY LIKE SOME SORT OF PUNCHING DOG MONSTER...AS SEEN IN SUCH POPULAR VIDEO GAMES LIKE BLOODY ROAR #'S 2, 4, EXTREME, AND PRIMAL FURY!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Normally I never give out bad reviews, but I'm seriousally offended. "(Paige is addicted to heroin because she was raped and everyone knows rape victims start taking drugs later on)" I think you're the one on heroin. Or maybe I just missed the banwagon. This is more of a way rude, offensive parody.

does anyone else find this insanely hilarious? you're demented, and i love it.

This has to be the WORST story I've ever read, but also the dumbest/funniest. This is meant to be a parody!

If this is supposed to be angst, then you are doing a very poor job. It is definitely more parody. Also, why didi you call Terri " Terry 'Fat **' McEatsalot" Because that is rude sladerism not only to Terri's character but to the actress playing Terri. Thank you,

Heidi

Ay, no, Ellie! Que bruja... Creo que le falta la chica simpatica y inteligente... como se llama? Emma? Oh well.

Que buena cuenta, oyster boy. Escribe mas.