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| Aimed mischief 2005-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI love it! It's so sweet! Greate work! Keep updating, cuz i love your stories! |
| Stevie 2004-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, you could use other words, example: Instead of scream you could write yelled and stuff you know. Well, hope to see more! |
| MariShal 2004-07-26 ch 1, | abuseNice job, very funny and cute! Write more Shal & Bren...but please add paragraphs and spaces, all together makes it harder to read. It would be a good idea if you allow annonymous reviews too. |
| MayaDutchy 2004-07-18 ch 1, | abuseAw! How cute story! lol luv it;) ~ClearKiss |