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Reviews For: my sack of potatoes

Aimed mischief
2005-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI love it! It's so sweet! Greate work! Keep updating, cuz i love your stories!
Stevie
2004-09-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseWell, you could use other words, example: Instead of scream you could write yelled and stuff you know. Well, hope to see more!
MariShal
2004-07-26
ch 1,
abuseNice job, very funny and cute! Write more Shal & Bren...but please add paragraphs and spaces, all together makes it harder to read.
It would be a good idea if you allow annonymous reviews too.
MayaDutchy
2004-07-18
ch 1,
abuseAw! How cute story! lol luv it;)

~ClearKiss
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