Oh dear why are you so talented? I saw your pictures about Mishima/Kazama families and they are so good! And now you write a nice story. You know what? I'm jealous ^^. Keep going on!

I albsolutely LOVE this fanfic, its my favorite of all time. I even read it for fun. XD Your an kickass writer and my inspiration. I hope you can write more when you get the chance, because your work is amazing(:

Hey, cool fanfic, I really liked the ending in all, abit to much sexuality for my taste though. Keep going, I think you have a talent for first person views.

oii!! SUGOI! ^^

moree! wonder what happens next!! (my god.. why must I always be in a rush... T_T )

This story never gets old. Everyday I just have to read this story both ways at least once.

Aweome story. I really enjoyed every bit of it. Its been a long time since I played the videogame but I really didnt like the Jun/Kazuya pairing.

ah ... you made me cry T T

My tear drop in front of me now ...

AH! yes this is HAPPY ENDING

i like it ... i really like it ...

I LOVE YOUR FIC !

oh god. i gonna crazy !

Jun was bleeding and Kazuya ..ow > <

i like it !

While I like your version of Jin's name origin, alas, it is incorrect. See, the meaning of a name depends on the characters (kanji) that are used to write the name. The same kanji can be read in several different ways, and the same sound can be written with several different kanji. Japanese is confusing like that. The kanji for Jin's name means "virtue". Incidentally, it's the same kanji that is in Jinpachi's name. It's implied that Kazuya had a good relationship with his grandfather when he was a kid, so maybe Jin was named after him. Maybe.

And as an extra fun fact, other name meanings!
Asuka: Flying bird
Kazuya: One eight
Heihachi: Flat eight
Jinpachi: Virtue eight
Jun: Standard/rule/aim/quasi-/semi-/level

The moral of the story is: The Mishima men give crappy names to their sons, and Japanese names rarely have pretty, meaningful translations. Asuka and Jin got lucky.

Oh, and I love all of your Kazuya/Jun fics! Have almost all of them in my Favorites.

Jun's POV. this is starting to get interesting. Keep Writing!

OMG!! that was the most sweetest,saddest, and again sweetest story! this story had me crying on the sad parts and sumtimes laughing on the funny parts. please do another one with another Tekken couple! it was so awesome! and u should redp this story in Kazuya's point of view..

*clapping* Yeah!! Hooray!! ^^ I love this story! o_O And I don't really like Kazuya OR Jun that much...o_o though I do like Jin...^^ Anyways, wonderful!*runs to read sequel*

--Relics

I want to say that in my heart you are TRULY gifted..that was touching, poetic, sizzling, romantic, dramatic-EVERYTHING! Why the ** havnt you won the Nobel prize for writing! GOOD ON YOU!

OMG OMG OMG! aw...:-( i almost cried...lol...kinda sensative...lol...n e ways, tha story was good! lub it a lot! ^_^