I love how you discribed the self-harm here, because to me, watching the blood pour out of my body is the main reason why i cut. I mean, there are other reasons, you know for the release and to feel and shit, but just to see my skin open up and the flow of the blood. Tragically beautiful in a way :)

Great story! I loved it! Maybe you'll continue with this...?

Sure you're not writing my autobiography here? Lol... I'm trying rather hard not to cry actually, because you captured the exact feelings, thoughts, etc... It was just amazing. Best fic I've read in a long time. I just wish I'd had Snape to stop me, but I eventually stopped it myself. I hope you've stopped too and that things are better now *hugs*

I loved it! it was really great! i used to SI. I still think about it at times. but my friends an my bf and gf are always stoping me. I am getiting help for it but nothing really seems to work for me...

imteresting you have captured someof the feeling i get when i cut good work.

Nice story, very realistic. I SI, and it really hit home.

Great story. Terrible ending. Well, not that terrible but rather akward; this is because you added the exlcamation mark at the end. If you would take that off, it would be so much better.

And you said my story was realistic! That was amazing! All of her emotions are ones that someone in that position would actually feel. You are a really great writer, I can't wait to read more!

Karma J

I think that this an interesting new approach to the Harry Potter theme. I do not self-harm, but I have several friends who do so I know how hard it is to deal with cutting. You do not have to be the cutter yourself to feel the consequences. I think you could actually continue with this story, because with this first chapter you have opened up windows of possible outcomes. You are a very fluent, talented, true-to-life writer.

That was really sweet and very well written.

poor Hermione :( really good, you made me feel for her...

1 thing, towards the begining: 'No one realised that she was as confused as she was'

kewl...i actually really really like that fic

blessed be

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That's awesome :) Write more!

Thanks for the review on my Fanfic by the way!

Cheekii

Good job on displaying her emotions. I think that a little more insight into her mind and Snape's could have been helpful. I like dthis fic immensly and I tihnk you should turn it into a chaptered story. I'm adding you to my Author alert list, to.

I really liked it, it was good and very sad :(