well this is a fun story, quite different then what i usually read.

and what do you mean when you say there are almost no HikaGo fans. :/

Hikaru no Go just happens to be my favorite manga of all time and its mostly the only type of fanfics i read.

well anyway, you remind me of me, i remember wishing i could play go. (then i played online against much better players without know a thing about how to play... i really should have learned the game first. maybe i would have lost with less then a 323 moku difference.)Never play Go unless you know how, that what i learned.

which is why im studing on begginer how to play Go websites. (there're helpfull.)

well anyway, i think this story is really good.

and it would be nice to see the next chapter soon.

i'll be looking foward to it.

_ Kari

Very good! Hey, I was thinking, what if one of the characters met a fangirl?

Wow, this is an interesting concept you have going here!

I've never read any of your previous works, but a couple things that bothered me was that the actions were in present tense (I'll copy paste an example): "Akari yells at him" I don't know, but to me it would make more sense if it said, "Akari yelled at him." Just something I thought might be worth mentioning.

Either way, this concept is fresh from all the Hikaru/Akira stuff in here. Keep it up .