this story is okay but kid of boring sorry but it's the truth.

Horrible. Meaningless. Filled with cliche.

I thought the writting was rather good, but to me this felt like a fragment of a story rather than an actual story. It needed more to it, but I know where you're coming from. I often have just specific scenes in my head that I think I awesome in one way or another and I just want to spit them out or type them or what not, but I try and build a story around them (of course I don't recommend this because sometimes you end up having to cut the scene you wrote the whole story for in the first place).

Like the idea! Please write more! Lovely Greetings from over the Atlantic

It's not bad, even though it is a bit short =P