Okie dokie! One little error, it's Chao not Chow, just fyi. I like the pase of this story and I like where it is going. I know you said you've shelved it for a while, but I think you should definatly continue!

You have a fan. I admit that I did not read every word. Just skimmed through the fic but damn it looks so interesting! And I like your writing style from other fics so I decide that I'm hooked. This is just a preemptive review to keep you going! Please update!

Interesting take on it. I think it's working nicely. Keep up the good work.

Really interesting alt universe. I like the parallels between this and the original story. Excellent work, please write more.
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hey this is good. i love how you are doing it. poor Hakkai. (try's to kill the bad dragon muse)lol
Will keep up the good work!

crystal

PS have fun!LOL