 NaTsUkO-ChAn 2005-08-22 . chapter 8O.o Blinks. That was fast. I mean when and how that necromancy died. Hm but the story mainly on Tsu &soka-chan + Tastumi &Watari was lovely^^. Keep it up |
 Tainted Halo 2005-03-21 . chapter 8Ooh I loved that... It was perfect. ^_^ |
 penny 2005-03-13 . chapter 8 Wonderful story :) |
 fYr3 ph03nix 2005-02-13 . chapter 8Ooh, I like this. When I first started reading this, I thought that it was going to be more dark and angst-y, but it turns out to be...not. Not really, anyway. Very articulate, ph03nix. *sighs*
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I liked how each chapter switched inbetween different POV and you kept them very well in character; even Tatsumi in this last one. So props to you on that; it's not that easy to keep them in character and still have fluff (especially for Tatsumi).
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Overall, a very nice story and it's well done to boot. ^^ Dammit, I forgot what I had to say. Damn sister bothering me. Nah, I love her. =P
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Hmm, but I really did forget what I was going to say. And it was good too... Damn. -__- Sorry...
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*sighs* All right, then. I guess there's no use pondering over the forgotten (haha, yeah right) so I'll just stop. 'Kay. Love your story. Until next time. Tootles.
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 Mikazuki Senshi 2004-12-11 . chapter 8:squeals with joy and smacks into a wall:: owie...
this fic is uber shiny!
write more soon, ne? |
 Redaura 2004-10-21 . chapter 8 OPo. enjoyed reading that XD very nice. i am going to see if you ahve posted that other fic. |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 8*bows*no problem my dear,it was a pleasure to read this little piece of masterwork. |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 7haha,funnu funnu funny!i liked this chap!hell,who wouldn`t? |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 6oh...what can I say?I am lost for words,my dear. |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 5oh...they cuddled!*cheers*poor girl,I feel sorry for her...*sad eyes*
please keep up this briliant work,ne? |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 4*bows*you truly know how to make this very enjoyable,my dear.I am so in love with this story by now that I simply couldnt stop reading even if I was forced.watari is just as funny as ever...haha... |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 3haha,watari is really funny,I like him!
giving love advice...hm,very well-written my dear,as always*bows* |
 Kanilla 2004-10-17 . chapter 2*sighs*man,this story is one of the best yami fics I`ve ever read,I tell you that!no kidding,it is great!I especially enjoyed the part about feeding each other,that was so sweet. |
 Kanilla 2004-10-16 . chapter 1aw,so sweet!I will definitely read the rest of this one,that you can trust me on!a very delicate and well-written piece of work,indeed!
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 Ealinesse 2004-10-14 . chapter 8I don't usually do a lot of reviewing, I'm ashamed to admit - I'm a little bit of a lurker - but when I do it's usually because I completely adore a fic. Eg: this one.
Great characterisation and character depth (as well as development) is something I absolutely love to see in a story, and the final admissions of Tsuzuki and Hisoka, and perhaps even to a greater extent those of Tatsumi and Watari, at the end left me sitting there for a moment, practically gushing over the fact that the four of them had finally found someone. You do first-person narrative so well, and can, unlike many other authors I've read, convincingly switch between them. I think your Wataris is the best I've seen, and it's great to see you've given him a deeper personality other than just the genki-crazy-baka front. ~_^
I was actually sad to see this story end, since I was so lucky to stumble upon it in the first place, but then I saw you had made it into an arc. Which, I might add, I'm going off to read now, (that is, if it's up yet?). Thank you for writing this! It is honestly one of the best YnM fics I've ever read! ^_^ *Clicks 'Add To Favourites'.
~~Ealinesse. |
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