OMG! His patronus is a chocolate bar?!?! XD you genius genius GENIUS!!

Lmao, this is the funniest idea I have ever heard of. This is brilliant, I have never seen anything like it! Congrats on coming up with this, my mind would never be silly enough to come up with it! But its amazing, dont stop!

this is hilarious. great start

This crazy, fun and delightfully wacky. Please continue!

Haha! What an amusing plot! Great stuff Becky! Ooh! And that beginning Tani made was super! The two of your writing styles are somewhat different, Becky- I think that you go for a more lightened mood and Tani- you're going for a more mystrious theme. But then again, you've both only wrote one chapter each so my theory may be way off. Still, I'm interested to see what comes next. Will this evool moustache be vaquished? :P
Keep posting!
luv,
Fallen-Snow

Hilarious chapter! I don't think I'll be able to watch POA again without laughing my head off when Remus (and his furry friend) appears.

This is seriously the most original story idea I've heard of in a VERY long time. Good lord it's hilarious!! I was actually laughing out loud. Please keep up the good work and humor!

Kind regards.

Off-the-wall original and weird. good so far. Loved Pupin's Patronus.

Extremely amusing, disturbing and very well written.
This story ROCKS! Update!

: :is too busy rolling on the floor laughing to send in a review saying how good it is: :

hahaha! i'm gonna tesae my dad about his moustache being "alive" now! ;)
yo
~Padfoot

Hahahaha...it is the evil moustache of DOOM! This sounds like it's off to a good start, I'm interested to see where you take it.