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charmed forever 7/31/11 . chapter 18
i know its being a few years but could u do a sequel if you are there please but manybe a bit more of paige and leo maybe wyatt and chris could be paige's kids instead.please,please,please
SENNAR 10/21/07 . chapter 18
AH! FINISH THIS AH!i gonna go craze!
BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 18
I loved the ending. I'm glad everything worked out in the end, for a while there it was a total soap opera(not that that's bad). I liked the Dan being enchanted into a demon. That was an interesting storyline. I loved your story.
BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 14
I like the suspenseful end to this chapter. I don't like that Leo just assumes she was being unfaithful the whole time. He doesn't use logic. I love your story.
BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 12
I was planning on waiting until the end of the story to review so that I could read through it faster but I loved this chapter too much. I love the Paige/Leo dynamic. That's probably the best catalyst for a Piper/Cole relationship I've read about. I really appreciate that you devoted a chapter to both Phoebe/Jason and Paige/Leo even though you weren't as happy to write about it. Those chapters were great regardless. I have to say though that if I were Piper, Paige would be out of the manor in a heartbeat because she doesn't own any of the house. I love your story and I can't wait to read on.
wiccanforever 6/7/07 . chapter 18
Great story!
jules70 4/29/07 . chapter 18
You are so wonderful at writing Piper and Cole together! Thank you for another terrific story!
csigeeksmeetsharrypottergeeks 6/7/06 . chapter 18
i have no idea why i am reading all these piper/cole fanfics but man are they good. yours is truly truly greatness i thank you for the entertainment
CharmingAngelNL 3/13/06 . chapter 18
I can totally see the last scene in front of me, LoL!
Karone Evertree 12/27/05 . chapter 1
"He had met and married the wrong Halliwell." so true..

great chapter!:) i think i've read this before, but oh well..I love it and didn't review before..
April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 7
That is kinda sad. Cole must feel heartbroken.
April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 6
I'm only finishing this because you are awesome. This chapter is a small improvement, but the writing still seems forced.
April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 5
I'm gonna be honest, this story isn't very good. I love your other Cole/Piper work, and I'm on my way to check out your Harry Potter work, but this story seems forced, like you don't want to write it..
April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 4
Sigh...
April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 3
I can't wait to see Cole and Piper all hot..
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