 charmed forever 7/31/11 . chapter 18 i know its being a few years but could u do a sequel if you are there please but manybe a bit more of paige and leo maybe wyatt and chris could be paige's kids instead.please,please,please |
 SENNAR 10/21/07 . chapter 18AH! FINISH THIS AH!i gonna go craze! |
 BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 18I loved the ending. I'm glad everything worked out in the end, for a while there it was a total soap opera(not that that's bad). I liked the Dan being enchanted into a demon. That was an interesting storyline. I loved your story. |
 BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 14I like the suspenseful end to this chapter. I don't like that Leo just assumes she was being unfaithful the whole time. He doesn't use logic. I love your story. |
 BlackHeartsxxRedSpades926 6/30/07 . chapter 12I was planning on waiting until the end of the story to review so that I could read through it faster but I loved this chapter too much. I love the Paige/Leo dynamic. That's probably the best catalyst for a Piper/Cole relationship I've read about. I really appreciate that you devoted a chapter to both Phoebe/Jason and Paige/Leo even though you weren't as happy to write about it. Those chapters were great regardless. I have to say though that if I were Piper, Paige would be out of the manor in a heartbeat because she doesn't own any of the house. I love your story and I can't wait to read on. |
 wiccanforever 6/7/07 . chapter 18Great story! |
 jules70 4/29/07 . chapter 18You are so wonderful at writing Piper and Cole together! Thank you for another terrific story! |
 csigeeksmeetsharrypottergeeks 6/7/06 . chapter 18i have no idea why i am reading all these piper/cole fanfics but man are they good. yours is truly truly greatness i thank you for the entertainment |
 CharmingAngelNL 3/13/06 . chapter 18I can totally see the last scene in front of me, LoL! |
 Karone Evertree 12/27/05 . chapter 1"He had met and married the wrong Halliwell." so true..
great chapter!:) i think i've read this before, but oh well..I love it and didn't review before.. |
 April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 7 That is kinda sad. Cole must feel heartbroken. |
 April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 6 I'm only finishing this because you are awesome. This chapter is a small improvement, but the writing still seems forced. |
 April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 5 I'm gonna be honest, this story isn't very good. I love your other Cole/Piper work, and I'm on my way to check out your Harry Potter work, but this story seems forced, like you don't want to write it.. |
 April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 4 Sigh... |
 April Boo 11/3/05 . chapter 3 I can't wait to see Cole and Piper all hot.. |