It is so cute. Romantic yet to the point. I hate when I read a story about them and it has a paragraph just to describe a robe or something dumb like that. fabulous

this was good, very creative! i actually think that the'lemon' warning was a little much, all they did was kiss...

good job, anyway!

yay! I likie! too bad its hard to find good hades/persephone stories!! i like urs!

Its not too short. I love it. Just enough to get the point across.

Oh, I like it. I can totally see it happening this way.
~Ani

it's a nice story

hmm interesting. i think the dialouge at the end is my favorite part. The use of the word 'confinement' in the beginning isnt clear.

please continue. It's really good.

Ooh. Smut. Yum. :) I can buy this. In fact, I see Persephone as being quite that way. She'd be a maiden, about the time she'd be curious about the world. Perhaps she'd do things behind her mother's back. Lovely.

hey hey! this is ome interesting work... when'll ya update? update soon k??

very very nice and lemony!

Okay, I'm trying to get the point of the story through the words.

Although short, this story is very well written. I love Hades and Persephone, and I thought that your interpretation of their love was highly intriguing and beautifully expressed. Brava!

well this was an interesting take on the myth...not as believable but maybe i guess its just because i haven't read any fics with this take before...anyways i adore your writing style! keep up the good work!

I love your story please keep writing!