"Adam and I had some fun, and then one day, he got a phone call and said something about a stupid Boy Scout and having to go back to the States. I didn't get it, but there were no hard feelings."

I see what you did there!

On the other hand, fun story. Not fun like puppies and bicycles, but fun like an interesting read and a good way to spend a bit of time. That, and I have an indescribable weakness for Connor/Dawn fics, Key fics, resurrection fics and Buffy-Angel-and-Spike-part-on-clean-terms fics. So, yeah, you hit a few notes.

Cool story and I liked the plot. So thanks for writing.

Good story nice interactions and good characaters.

So, this marks the first time fanfic has made me cry. Wow. Your take on the characters is so spot-on, and your OCs are pure joy. I found myself just falling in love with Mikey. I'm so emotionally invested in this story; I just kept wanting it to go on, wanting to know what was happening with Angel and his fight against (or flight from) the Senior Partners. And now that Dawn has learned her purpose, can she help them?

Liked that. Likes that alot.

I LOVE YOUR STORY! I HOPE YOU WILL WRITE MORE. IT WOULD BE COOL IF YOU WRITE ABOUT DAWN GETTING REVENGE ON THE EVIL LAW FIRM. BT KILLING THEM AND SAVING THE WORLD FROM THEM.PLEASE LET ME KNOW IF YOU ADD ANY MORE. GREAT JOB YOU BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYE'S WHEN YOU BROUGHT FRED STORY!

I can't stop smiling. What an awesome story. I always thought the whole key thing had a lot of unused potential on the show and you managed to tie all sorts of loose ends together.

I think it's really sad that Illyria destroyed herself because she believed she could never function in this world, let alone as a force for good. But in doing so she proved herself wrong; sacrificing herself to save three lives. She was my favourite character on Angel.

Good beginning but bad ending. Too mushy and happy for my taste. It didn't help that you basically killed Illyria on you're way to reviving every single character that died to life.

This came out very nicely. Well done!

Touching end to an exciting story.

An excelent story, though I normally frown at fanfics which have a "reversal" effect on several events, this story earns it. The Live Journal Epilogue was also nice, if slightly sappy/fluffy (but then again, it's hard not to be with that situation). Though I must say that I think you didn't quite wrap up what happened with Illyria. It's implied what happens to her after her sacrifice(Returning to the Deeper Well), but that seems rather off when everyone other story is wrapped up without implication. But I have a tendancy to be a little overzealous with Illyria, so I may just be looking to hard. Not seeing the forest for the trees and all that. Overall, another excelent work.

Oh God. This was perfect.

So sweet and funny and just...perfect.

Thank you for this.

("". . . and I'm just saying that this whole kerfuffle wouldn't be happening if someone like Johnny Depp was playing Constantine instead of Keanu," Andrew was saying." Best. Line. Ever.)

ACK! I just went to your livejournal, and there's no epilogue posted there! I want to see what happens!

That was just perfect. I've been driving myself insane since I saw "Not Fade Away." I sobbed uncontrollably when Fred died, and then Wesley. This is good...I really like the Connor/Dawn.

Please, please, please post the epilogue on ? Please?

~Merusa

That was a nice ending - I'm not sure I agree that Illyria would be that unselfish, but given the way the Jossverse seems to work it's certainly a possibility. Looking forward to the sequel (just going to check my friends list to see if it's up).