 Nini the Electrocuted Sheep 2004-08-08 . chapter 4Hmm. Well, these were certainly interesting. I liked the one about Bors - he does seem quite content where he is, doesn't he? And anyway, he can't travle all the way back to Sarmatia with Vanora and thier army of bastards now, can he?
Dagonet really is the kind of guy that isn't all too intelligent, but makes up for it in other ways. He's an excellent warrior and he has a king heart. It was just so touching, after he died and they brought his body back, when the little boy went and took his ring, and later we see it looped on a thong around his neck... I nearly cried.
The one about Tristan was strange, actually. It didn't really speak about his feelings, other than enjoying the challenge of finding the Saxon scout and the companionship of his hawk. I found myself thinking during the movie that he wasn't really bothered with the way he lived - nothing really seemed to matter to him. He didn't mind if he died in battle, or if he ever got to see Sarmatia again or not. He's just always so quiet and thoughtful and distant...
Now, it was defenitely interesting that you wrote Lancelot's drabble from the begining of the movie, when he's still young. In a way he's always been the victor, surviving battles and sticking to his beliefes.
All in all, I think this was a good piece. Original, interesting, and well written. You've managed to convey plenty emotions and thoughts using a limited amount of words. It was excellent.
All the best -
~Nini-Mouse, the Electrocuted Sheep. |
 Trinity Day 2004-07-18 . chapter 4You know, I'm always greatly impressed by someone such as yourself, who is able to pack so much ... story, for lack of a better term, into so few words. Great job on all four of these! |