BLAH!! lol jk erm yes funny FUNNY funny funy lol rofl lmao roflmao YAY! ehehe you know who this is so...bye.

LOL, that should be interesting... glad u updated again! Keep up the good work!

*btw, thanks for the review!* ^_^

NOW i remember why i haven't reviewed yet! (an AHA! moment, if you shall say) you sent it over msn instant messenger 'cause it wasn't up yet!

but anyways, AWESOME chapter, always making me laugh... meanie... well, maybe not meanie... i dunno... i think i'm hyper again... hehe...*gives weak smile*

so... remember what we talked about before, and DO NOT make him be the last one! pwease? k...

again, totally awesome chapter dude! and update soon! cause your friend in saudi tells you to! so THERE! HA!

k... now i know i'm hyper... even though it's like 11:09PM... k... i'll stop annoying you and taking up your time, cause i know you will start school soon, and... ya... have fun! *grins wickedly*

got ta go!*scampers off like a scared kitty after seeing scary glare that Sabs sent*

~A-luver-ov-randomness~

This is brilliant! It's just so... random! Please update soon!

Over a year later and no other chappies...tear! I wanna know what happened to the rest of it. Well anyway I think this story was really good the chapters weren't thousands of words long and they weren't short either. Great discription and I don't think I saw any errors. well done! ^_^

ok that was odd but amusing ok i'll see u later.

yay great chapter that was good ok onward.

This is really good :) Listen, do you think you could do me a favour? Could you check out my website for me and email some feedback? I just need to know what people think :) I'm working on a new layout now but... anyways :D great story!

wickd story man! (that is a good thing)

:)

HI! i took your advice and read your story (and will continue to!) EXCELLENT!! can't wait to see what happens. am i the 5th reviewer?

Hullo, again. Two days and counting. I've abandoned my oath of not reviewing for your stories because you are my friend, but what the heck, I am sad enough, I can't become more sadder than I already am.

Comments

1. Author's notes in the middle of the story are a bit annoying. It's like watching LOTR in the movie theatre and then Fred Flinstone nagging at you, screaming, "I love Leggy!" Interrupts the flow. (Great, now it sounds like the whole talk about menustration) One note appeared in the first chapter, and I believe it had something to do with 'the story starting,' near the end of the chapter.

2. The story flows a bit slow...at the beginning, it was sort of getting boring. Although the first paragraph caught my interest, the next parts could have more action to it. (Ugh, I suck at wording and explaining...forgive me.) What I mean is that you could build suspense, and keep the reader interested. Add some witty dialogue. Oh, you can do it. You could put it in Hermione's doings, in third person, that could help.

3. Don't be a review **! Don't beg for reviews, or say "5 reviews or I won't continue!1" (the extra 1 was intended.) Although some people think the amount of comments left is the judge of the story's actual quality, it isn't in the least, and don't think that way, either. This puts you right in the position of your story being GAFF: God Awful Fan Fiction. (w.godawful.net)

4. Grammar Problemos: Don't write all capitals LIKE THIS EVEN IF THE CHARACTER IS SO MAD. Although you could get away with it sometimes but too frequently this happens. Yet the rest is ok, after much scrupulous attempts to find a mistake. You may now snort sarcastically.

Make the chapters longer, and with more content!

On the bright side...

Plot, is, at least, not a cliché, and thank you for not making it Serverus/Hermione or Draco/Hagrid or some other unthinkable sort of pairing. (I am not against gay people, I am just saying, Draco's one thing, but with Hagrid?!? I'm not even going to name some other absurd things, like Voldemort/Ron)

Plus, you have no big author's notes in the beginning or end. You start right at the story, where it's supposed to be, unlike some authors who feel the need to express their feelings about dying cows, their dating life, or whatever. Thank you.

- Ninja Cow -

very good... i know Felinefairy loves reviews... I go to school with u! hehe. please make another chapter! thanks!

please contimue! i want to know what happens! Will Hermionie do something bad?!?! Tell me! or else! i will be mad at you during school! GR!

Interesting so far. Please continue, I want to find out who the heck Teresa is! (No, of course that's not my only motivation...)