I know its been a really long time since youve worked on this story, ans i dont know if you want to continue writing it or if your finished, but if you write another chapter, id be happy to read it. Good Job on this story, and you didn't put too many military terms into it.

R

I like it! Hope to read more soon!

Hi! Don't forget to check your email, i've left a review there!

Ha, yeah it did. And I was right; he does suck at life.

You're welcome)! This is a great story so update soon!

I love it so much! Please add on soon. Also, you may want to proofread what you put up for word/ spelling errors. just a helpful hint!

Oh...this is rough. Who's Samuel Hawthorne? He sucks at life.

hm...interesting... Update soon!