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Heaven Leigh Casteel The 2nd 1/11/06 . chapter 4
Cool. My name is Kendra too. You don't go on gaia online by the way? Because I know someone on there whos name is Kendra and one of her favorite quotes is curiouser and curiouser.
Samantha-Girl Scout 11/24/05 . chapter 35
i LOVE THIS! yay! i'm glad there's a sequel!
Fae Black 5/21/05 . chapter 35
Meh, good. I have trouble writing 'ice-block' characters sometimes, but my family says I'm one meself. lol. Keep going.
WWE'sPyroDevil36 9/14/04 . chapter 35
wow, this is a cool story! I can't wait for anohter chapter! I really like Kendra, her attitude is really cool, I can't wait to see what she says to Eomer! Please update soon!

Lots of love,

Tina
Eagle Took 9/10/04 . chapter 21
cool story...why are some chaps short?

i'm still reading this story...it's more like the movies then the book
LittleCrazy1 9/8/04 . chapter 5
this story isn't bad so far. it would help if you made your chapters just a little longer. the first couple of chapters could've been one chapter. and I dont think that gandalf would invite some random girl he JUST met to a council that decides the fate of his world. but otherwise its a good story! I like what you did to Earth. How you made the whole war and the bomb with the sun thing. Nice and original.
Lady Dragon Jammchr 9/8/04 . chapter 35
I would like to know what has happened to 'Kec" and the rest in your story. Do finish
The Cap'n 8/11/04 . chapter 24
I realy like your story. I hope you update soon!
Werecat99 8/11/04 . chapter 2
Overall, this is not that bad. I can see you have put some effort in this but there are a few things that I cannot overlook.

*The subject of "girl falls into ME" has been done TOO many times.

*The chapters are TOO short, more like paragraphs.

I think there's room for improvement here. Good luck.
Saber Apricot 8/4/04 . chapter 1
Your chapters are awfully short... Remember, quality is better than quantity. Put some of those chapters together. Happy writing and good luck!
Ldssunshinegrl 7/18/04 . chapter 16
Cool story. The chapters are a little short, but they're not boring. Most of them are rather exciting. Kec sounds interesting. I wonder what other powers she has. Does Boromir trust her yet? Will he ever? I think maybe he likes her. That would make for an interesting plot twist. I'm really looking forward to what Galadriel thinks of her. Continue with the story, please. I'm looking forward to seeing how this is played out. I hope you update soon. Until then, TTFN ta ta for now:)
Aralain 7/17/04 . chapter 16
cool, cool, keep updating
Aralain 7/17/04 . chapter 10
Yah! I love this
Aralain 7/17/04 . chapter 9
Oh, I see how it is. She's just going to disappear
Aralain 7/17/04 . chapter 8
So, is she with the fellowship?
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