What! Although this story is good, I hate it when people include themselves in their stories! Well, I still can't wait for the next chapter. My complait has somesthing to do with the "Sort by Author" catorgory! Bye!

pretty cute, jay, i like it. i can't write a serious review, b/c that's just not me :) the only thing negative i have is that ppl wouldn't really talk like that in 1001 AD, but it's ok, it doesn't have to bea realistic. later julie

You're doing well Jay...Keep it up bro. Luv ya man! Peace out