This was wonderful. Supurbly realized and written; it's the kind of story I've been looking for now that I've seen the movie.

It is short but well written, so matching the mood at the end of the book. I don't know about the movie, though, haven't seen it yet.

A very nice fanfiction. I'm so sad that Lancelot had to die. snif.

Jemiul

This I definitely like! The love triange you've developed against Arthur and Guinevere and Lancelot is truly real and emotional.

Very nice fic! Definitely reads like a continuation in the movie!
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I like the fact that both Arthur and Guinevere realize that Lancelot's sacrifice meant their future together..
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Geez all these Arthur fics and now I want to write one!

Speechless.

I love your portrayal of Arthur; he speaks more then he does in the actual film, but it is because of his mourning. Also, it is apparent he feels comfortable with Guinevere -- we watch him fall in love with her during this scene as spills his thoughts to her.

Incredible job. You don't find too many good King Arthur fics on this site. I wish there were more fics like this one.

I quite liked this. You captured what I thought the movie showed had as an interesting twist on a love triangle - they were both intrigued by Guinevere and she by them, but they *loved* each other. Well done!

You might be a junkie if...
half an hour after seeing a movie, you run to ff.net to see if anyone else slashed the characters. x.o

Anyway, great piece of work. The language and emotion are right on. Very refreshing, considering some of the other stuff that's floating around out there. :)

AW very sweet

Oh wow.
Very very lovely. Beautiful emotion and not too sappy either. The language chosen is dead on as well.
I did a piece kind of like this as well, and you have made me cry again!!
Great job, keep it up.

I adore the fact that the Arthur and Guinivere of your story aren't snapBANG in love. It seems very true to the movie, and is very well written, sweet moment.

Hello. I haven't sceen this movie yet,on the account that i havet found some one to go with. and i'm sad to say that most of the newer fanfictons are childish and badly written. Your intrey, thouh short, was verry refression. i think your a talnented wrighter and i look forward to reading more of your work.

Lovely story!

I adore Arthur and Guinevere in the movie... with no Lancelot (Even if he is a cute fellow :o)

Hope you'll write more about them!

Nice work