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| Deadly Hope 2004-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseI liked it. *copy and pastes for her wall* |
| Guan 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abusePoor Raistlin. Very sad poem |
| Petalwing 2004-07-17 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. But there are some lines I didn't quite understand. You have 3 times "there" in verse seven. Shouldn't it be "their"? Anyway, I didn't want to nitpick.Otherwiese, nice work. |