| Reviews for Cold |
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Ai-chan 3/4/11 . chapter 1 Nice story. I enjoyed it. |
sweet-cookie 7/17/09 . chapter 1aw.. amazing story! |
pisquenta 10/17/08 . chapter 1Oh that was sad, I like Sasu/Saku too, but it was indeed a rather nice way to end things, without making Sasuke turn gay or emotionally retarded. Kakashi is just adorable, I wanna hug him forever now! |
CherryBomb91 4/28/08 . chapter 1So I'm really glad that I found this. I love how you portrayed their relationship. And the story about Sasuke dropping Sakura in the dirty pond. So glad that you wrote this. |
Langus 4/21/08 . chapter 1I loved this! It was so well done :) Kudos to you for an excellent and endearing one-shot! Langus |
Melitza 4/8/08 . chapter 1Excellent transition into what you wanted to portray as per your A/N's. Smooth, easy read that is still deep and impactful. |
bones-angel 11/8/07 . chapter 1nicely done, with the portrayal of Kakashi and Sakura getting over their respective hang-ups... lovely! |
beautyinsleep 9/1/07 . chapter 1I really liked this. Kakashi's character was extremely believable in this story, and it was very well-written, as well. Great job! |
hello heartbreak 8/17/07 . chapter 1Beautiful. It would've been better without the Japanese littered here and there, though. Still, a job well done. |
celinae 7/20/07 . chapter 1This was a really good story, though I expected a much, much angstier ending than what actually happened. :P Nonetheless, the ending was sweet, and the situation pretty realistic, I have to say! |
loverofallthingschocolate 5/8/07 . chapter 1Love it! |
angel-tears-16 2/12/07 . chapter 1This was very nice. However, there is one thing that always bothers me, and is found consistantly in anime fanfiction. The use of Japanese in a fanfic is extremely irking. First of all, there is the use of formal words, between a couple Un would be used for yes and Uun for no. Furthermore the correct romanji spelling of "Ie" is 'Iie'. I think that the use of Japanese really takes away from the fic and interrupts the flow. I also have to wonder at why that last part is in Italics. Anyways, the piece itself was amazing and I agree with you on the things that would ahve to be overcome for Kakashi and Sakura to work, I think you did a very good job of developing Kakashi, and Sakura through Kakashi's eyes, or mind rather. |
Dolphingirl32173 12/31/06 . chapter 1Sarah: it came off fine, kiddo. i like this fanfic. it's perty cool in my opinion. |
WriterPoet 11/1/06 . chapter 1Interesting. |
Yunique 8/28/06 . chapter 1 That was the most beautiful story I have ever read on this damned site. Q_Q It made me want to cry. Q_Q Though, i'm a person that usually isn't capable of crying so easily. XD My favourite line was... No need to look underneath the underneath there... XD This story is so sweet, and woderfully written. _ I enjoyed reading it extremely. XD Fave! I hope you write more Kakasaku XD It's a good thing I joined the Kakasaku LJ or i wouldn't have found this today. XD Ja! Yunique |