I have to tell, that your story was beautiful, bitter, also but you get the idea...

I really liked it, and yeah Shion is not the happiest of the saints, I feel bad for them.

Very charming.

This is a nice story and sad sorry but I'm not a wordy person

This is such a nice, sweet and real good fanfic. I really liked it. Good job!

so beautiful.too bad they had to be separated for so long. i sort of felt good when they met each other in the Hades saga, but i the same time i felt bad because they were going to be separated again. hope that in the Elysium saga they can finally be together agin forever and ever after Athena resucites them.

This is so great

I think you're interruptions

were great

Thank u so much K for translating

once agan arigato gozimasu

that great i love shion very much and dohko its so sweet. love in the air

well, I'm glad to see that someone else is picking up the Dohko-Shion banner as well (even if not in Eglish) .. . I have always found their parting scene in the Hades OVA incredibly touching, and the sadness of shouldering responsibilities that kept them apart ... very angst-rich.

The translation was lovely, than you "K" for bringing this to us English-speakers.

I love your story.It's actually the first Dohko/Shion I've seen.I was a little misty-eyed at the end of it...very moving.Hope to see more from you. _

... Yay! Bélier-sama now in English as well! Thanks to K-san (very well translated, nice job)!

Do I need to tell you again how much I liked this fic? Because I did like it a lot! Even if the couple is not one of my favorite, though not one I despise either. Actually, thanks to your lil' fic I'm growing a kind of fondness for ShionXDohko (or vice-versa, I'm not very loyal to this "name order" rule...).