First of all goku would have kicked yamcha out of the house before flying away XD and its kakarot not carrot..anyway its a such cute and sweet story... I love it

it was pretty good

FUUCCKK YOU BIYATCH! lousy!

HAHA THAT LAST PART WAS FUNNY !

OMG! That was just a great story!

Dat last part was so funny (not really, but I like to exagerate a little)

AWWW ANOTHER SWEET G/CC! I love it! And the cute lil' B/V too... "hmph, I don't HAVE a soulmate!" We all know he does ;) That's so cute! I love it Val! Absolutely positively! BON BON BON BON BON! I know french too! Keep it up Val, your G/CC's kick ass!

I felt that was a good clean story and had a good rating. It was romantic but, it didn't quite portray the characters right. And there were a lot of misspelled words. It really needs to be gone over.

Lots of errors but it was ok

real cool!/real funny 2

I liked your story. I love stories about true love, I know I sound just like woman but hey oh well!

That was great!

It's Kakkarot not Carrot

i love the ending. and i love it. good thing she explain it all. more stories bout them, please

heeheee! Funnnyyyyyy!