I love this story. Thank you.

OUCH! Harsh! Poor Homy-chan! *tears* no! Good story but it was play format...oh well. We're all guilty of it heehee. Well done

NOo Homunculus! So Sad... I wish people would start writing more of Eike and Homunculus.

I knew that would happen.

Oh, my! I'm afraid something bad's about to happen. T_T

Poor, poor little Homunculus... So frail and delicate.

Lots of funny stuff in this chapter. Poor Homunculus... Ooh, the plot thickens! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, I think I know where this fic is heading, and I like it! hahaha Nice work. You've got the characterization down pat, and the ideas are great. Eager to read more!

Nice idea! Might want to double check your spelling a little more carefully. I noticed you used "brake" instead of "break," among other typos. Otherwise, nice story!

::Sobs:: So sad. IT was a good story though. Keep up the great work!

HI

yey u finished it.

It's was brillaint. though it was sad..and i wanted to cry at the end.

it was great.

hi i really like this fanfic homunculus and eike are still in character. i hope u continue this fanfic it's brilliant.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

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