LOVE IT! you give them such personality so i can't even complain about the sara factor... :)

Hello helen! I am sitting in LAura's room and reviewing your story. Party time! hahahaha. I'm gunna go before you see me!

Billy loves you!

-Me

p.s.: Grissom in a thong!

Good story chump i finally found it.

I really enjoyed your portrayal of the CSI characters. I could just feel Grissom's feeling of unease at the social event, so different from his easy manner in the lab or the field. I could also visualize the plot in an actual TV story, and so liked the accuracy of your characterization.

CSI rules!

Mrs. R

Intresting,you should continue this.

nice story lots of detail
please keep writin'
i love it & not to out
of character

Cute! A nice way to ease things.

aw!
Awesome work!