 HinamoriNaruko6coolandspicy9 2009-11-01 . chapter 7is there like gonna have any hiei and botan fluff scenes?
i love the HieiBotan pairing! =^-^= |
 raeon 2009-06-25 . chapter 7next chapter please...am kinda excited to read what happens next... |
 Yume Ninja 2008-12-20 . chapter 4 forget what i said in my last review about shuichi's brother but if u wanna no about shuichi's brother then watch the yu yu hakusho episode where kurama goes back home with an assignment from yomi |
 MoonsDaughterLuv 2008-10-12 . chapter 7This is great!! I can't wait for some H/B fluff!! Update soon, please! |
 Yume Ninja 2008-08-12 . chapter 7 you want to know about Shuichi's brother? i can help!!
i dont know his age or what he looks like but i do know that his name is also Shuichi. And he's a step brother. His dad got married to Kurama's mother.
Yeah that doesn't help much i know. Sorry.
Anyway your fic is AMAZING!! you keep the characters from becoming OoC!! Hooray for you! |
 YusukiShredder 2008-03-10 . chapter 7CHYAH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! |
 YusukiShredder 2008-02-09 . chapter 4AWESOMENESS FLOWS WITHIN YOUR WRITING-- *continues on for about an hour about how your writing and plot is amazing* |
 Hieiko 2007-11-02 . chapter 7Good story... hope you continue it. :) |
 Bullet2tm 2007-10-23 . chapter 7Hey,
This is a great story, please update soon! I love it, especially hieixbotan. Please update soon.
Bullet |
 Unspoken Silence 2007-03-30 . chapter 7i like your story so far...your fanfics are addicting to read...^_^ |
 Lunchbox413 2006-10-26 . chapter 7You've got to be kidding me? You stopped there? How can you do something like that? You can't just leave an awesome story right in the middle like this. It's not fair. You've got to finish this story. I've got to know what's going to happen.
By the way, you're characterization is perfect. You're making Hiei and Botan difficult and that's how it should be. With their personalities, there's no way that they'd really get along. Their relationship would always be a stuggle and you're definitely making it one.
I hate when people make them fall in love instantly and Hiei goes through about two seconds of denial and then instantly they're all lovey-dovey (if that's even a word).
You, however, are working it out perfectly. Well, it would be perfect if it had an ending.
Well, now that I've rambled on and on, please write more. |
 purpleeyednekoyoukai 2006-07-13 . chapter 7this story is awesome...
I wish I could keep Hiei as in character as you can XP Stoic characters are a pain in the you know what to write...
oh well...
update ASAP please!
~emma |
 ianii 2006-07-05 . chapter 7Ah! I am in love with this fic! So much I just can't stand it. I think it's time for an update by now, lady! x)
Oh, the BotanxHiei love is just perfect. Awesome job. |
 Brittany 2006-04-26 . chapter 7 this story is absolutely amazing! |
 LostsoulofRegret 2006-01-17 . chapter 7i'm really glad you finally decided to update...i read this story last summer and it made me mad that you havent updated anyways this was a good chapter i enjoyed it...i really got all caught up in it...cant wait till next time...
TearsofSadness17 |