Your story is really cute. The Luke and Lorelai banter was perfection. However, I especially liked the way you described Luke and Rory's hugs.

Oh! CUTE! CUTE! CUTE! CUTE!

That was REALLY GOOD! i like this story

two enthusiastic thumbs up!

aw, that was so cute :D...

Brie

Great Story! You did a really good job with the bickering/flirting Lorelai and Luke are constantly at that makes them so great together. A lot of romantic stories get so wrapped up in the long, mushy 'I love you' talks that they forget that very vital part of Lorelai and Luke's relationship.

I also liked the part with Emily- even though she can get annoying at times, she's one of my favorite characters. You did a great job with her interaction with Lorelai.

The only thing I would suggest you work on is making sure that all of your sentences make sense to the reader- there were a few that I didn't really get what the character was trying to say. Other than that, great job- this was a very entertaining story!

Really cute story. Good to see something involving lorelai's parents going well. Loved your Lorelai Emily interaction and your Lorelai Luke too. Everything was great! Keep writing!