not bad and

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You need to spell and grammer check this.

what THE hEll does "Johnny put out apicof his family" mEaan?

yeah

Don't be discouraged about a slow chapter. I'm still stuck on mine. just write on through it,a dn things'll pick up. I look forward to your next installment.

Wow! I thought you forgot about this story. Hey nice to no you're still goning strong! Great job!

Poor Sonya, I feel so bad for her :(. Anyways, this story is really good! Please continue, I wanna know what happens next!

Could become quite interesting...

I like it.

sad(although a little to short)

Nice! But I think this should be classified as a drama. It's a damn fine one, too.