DUDE! that was so fricken cool! and such a great story!^_^ THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! i loved reading it, and it was a slight twist on Tao, which was pretty damn cool!^_^

~Smells like Rain...

Wow!! What a wonderful story!! I couldn't stop reading until I've reached the end!

You have incredible storytelling skills. Tao is a great, tragic character. So pleased with the happy ending as well.

Hope to read more of your work soon!! (especially KP ones!)

Aww! This was such a cute story. I loved it. The ending was adorable and I must say, you have the most interesting and pleasing way of telling a story. You have a real talent. Again. great story. Please keep up the wonderful work.
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Omfg that was soo good, I normally hate made up characters but you made them really good. I loved your story it was really fun to read :)

- tidus4yuna

A very original and well written story. Love tao, she is a great character.
Kim and Shego seem to have kept there character throughout the story.
Hope to see more from you!

"Secret Goverment project"? "Perfect killing machine"? Please. I liked this story up to that point.
Maybe someone whould explane how ANY of these "perfect weapons" are better than a main battle tank or an attack helecopter.

OK, in the end of Chapter 4 and the begining of chapter 5, what happened to all those people who were in Kim's neighborhood? Why didn't the baddies just take Tao?

I've read the other fanfic that has Tao in it. But I really, really like Tao's background in this story better. That and the fact Tao in this version loves a girl named Farah, instead of Tomas. XD Poor Tomas...

Hey, how come you never finished the Teen Titans series concerning Starfire and Raven? Come on, please finish 'em! You have only two, and you did an excellent job, so plesae finish them soon, or I'll kill you. Deal? Good, I'll be watching you...

I love your story.

perfect ending
i'm very glad that tao got all healed, she didn't deserve that
great fic

I freaking loved this chapter.. keep up the good work.

great so far
can't wait to see how this turns out

poor tao
can't wait to find out who shot her
great so far

I dunno why but I'm really into Kim Possible right now (especially Shego). This was a great Shego/Kim fic. I only wished that Shego and Kim took longer to get together. Tao and her bg is quite interesting so far. Anyways, look forward to the next chapter and more Shego/Kim!