This story (and so many others like it) make me think about how much happier Harry and Hermione would be if they'd just grow a backbone and take care of business rather than going on to live empty second-choice lives with people who they know aren't suited for them. I find it hard to believe that the top witch from Hogwarts in fifty years and the Boy Who Prevailed wouldn't have the guts or enough self respect to fix a personal problem once they knew what that problem was.

It would seem logical that if they could face and defeat the most powerful dark wizard of all time they could certainly dump a girlfriend/boyfriend (kindly, of course) and find a way to live their lives in a healthy and happy way.

I really loved this story, it was sad, but very well written.

OH! I love it!

All I can say is that is was VERY good. I love it so very much. Keep up the great work!

Kinda sad, don't ya think? And a little weird... Hm. Definatly makes you think! Well there's another spelling error. It's in the beginning.

"I think was always in love with her, just never knew it." Yah... You know that there's supposed to be an "I" in there. Well that's about it for this story.

wow, thats about all I can say because it was so insightfull, so tuching, and so sad at the same time.

It is a sad story! Why did you write it?! I'm crying here!

Wow. now this is a diffrent find of story. its really good. i really like it.

That was awesome. It was a bit sad though. Seeing as they never got to be together. Great job though. ;)

aww...that was so sad, but it was really good! i would have been like, screw ron im going to harry lol. you are a great writer. keep up the awesome work! -leah

O.M.G. That was so...theres nit even a word for how sad and depressing that was. Bloody good job.

My natural inclination is of course to hate it simply for the fact that I'm a Harry/Hermione all the way, through and through. But alas, you are such a great writer that I have to admit this was done very well, despite it's ending. So I can't say I love it but I did like it. :D good job.

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that is so sad! :(

It's very sad.

Good job! keep up the good work!

That was so nice, yet so sad. Wonderfully written. I especially liked your first paragraph and from the wedding onwards.

I liked how you went through what they did together in their lives, it could have done with a bit more detail, however I relise you can't write a lengthy paragraph for years one-five yet a sentance on years six and seven as you are unaware of what is yet too happen.

While reading I didn't see the need for the death of her parents, however upon reflection now I see that it added so much to their relationship as Harry helped her through it. It makes me sad however that they didn't relize it earlier so they could have been together, but then again that it exactly what you wanted to make a feature of. Excellent story with an excellent moral(If you want to call it that) to it.