 -usagi018- 2007-10-10 . chapter 4nice story~ Update soon~! XD |
 galerian57 2007-03-09 . chapter 4 cool story pleas update soon. |
 blisblop 2007-01-17 . chapter 4 Well time does fly.They are all there ,frozen...Ita/Sas!Come on! Have a heart! |
 blisblop 2006-11-18 . chapter 4 Where are you? Sob.sniff. |
 leo-lowen 2006-10-02 . chapter 1ya... so many ppl draw the cnnection b/w itasasu and kakasasu. you ppl may have a point...
neways... (applause) |
 YoungSasuke 2006-04-12 . chapter 4I wonder what Itachi's plan is... Whatever it is, it seems to me that the prodigy enjoys making Sasuke suffer. Ah well. When will Itachi finally make his move on Sasuke?
Just wondering, and hope you update soon. |
 blisblop 2006-02-06 . chapter 4 Oh, geez,I feel as confused as Sasuke,if he wants to be killed by him why come back to life?I can not wait to find out.Love Kakashi's perdicament,go Kakashi,do something about it!Though I want Uchihacest to win out. |
 blisblop 2006-01-11 . chapter 4 Very interesting.Itachi is chilling.One can not tell where this is going. |
 pickle-san 2005-12-29 . chapter 4Nice story, cool twists ^^ Update soon ^^
Toodles!
p.s. you know... i think itachi is quite the sadist ^^ |
 shamenteen 2005-08-06 . chapter 4This story is really good! *favs* Hope you update soon! |
 Fantastical Queen Ebony Black 2005-07-24 . chapter 4Heyo!
I think this chapter was pretty good. the first scene seemed a little pointless (it was cute, but I was left thinking 'and that was important because...?'). It did drag a little... more dialogue and less heavy paragraphing coulda made it that much better. it was interesting, though... i'm very interested in next chapter.
oh, i find that. as i go on my chapters get longer... and longer... don't make em too long, though... ^^
Lub u,
Ebony |
 sweetwithdrawal 2005-07-03 . chapter 3The chapters are a bit short but other than that this is a good fic. Yey for KakaSasu and Uchihacest^^ Update soon-I wanna see where you're gonna take this.
kisses. |
 Fantastical Queen Ebony Black 2005-07-02 . chapter 3Heyo! It _has_ been a while. ^^ It took me a moment to remember what this was.
That said, this chapter isn't really crappy. You're writing style is nice and thick; something you don't often find in fanfiction, and I like it. Good interactions, pretty much in character... the clam before the storm, n'est pas?
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 blisblop 2005-06-05 . chapter 2 Yup ,it is weird,what is not dead Itachi gonna do and when will Sasuke jump Kakashi,is that why Itachi is **?Someone is posing as Itachi?Itachi is posing as Kakashi...I hope you up date soon. |
 Zeilya 2005-05-25 . chapter 2I like... ^-^ poor sasuke fighting against his feelings... kakasasu, yay! |