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Matt 2005-08-30 . chapter 1
Write more? PLEASE?
Lil' Eowyn 2005-06-13 . chapter 1
Heya! Oh my gosh I love your fic so much and i say YOU MUST CONTINUE IT darling! Continue ... as will I... I hate to cut this short but i'm in a rush right now, this has started off great and can only get better!

luv ya
L.E
KatBell 2005-02-10 . chapter 1
YAY!! he cares!

I'm so happy for the ending.. truth be told I wouldn't have managed a sad ending... now insteed of sad tears they are happy once! I'm happy, couse they got eathother. and they need eathother and they are perfect for eathother... or that's my belife.

Loved the story.
Luna Javert 2004-12-26 . chapter 1
Name seems familiar . . . did you email me about RWThunder's fanart? Yes? No? Am I crazy? I really liked this. *glomp* It was quite good.

~Luna
labyrinth1119 2004-12-23 . chapter 1
First, thank you for the wonderful review! Naturally, I had to take a look at a fellow slash lover's work. Seriously, this was really beautiful! I have always imagined that Draco's home life would be so constrictive and abusive and this portrays it perfectly. I could feel his desperation and apathy with ever word you chose.
Also, I have always enjoyed the idea of Harry and Draco, in a sense, saving each other. You know Harry has major issues from what he has dealt with, and Draco can give a unique perspective on those emotions, having probably experienced a few issues himself.
I also noticed that you have not posted anything in a while and I do think that you are denying the world your original and creative mind. It's a little too late for me to add that to my Christmas wish list, but I will whisper a plea to Santa anyway...*huggles!*
Nelja 2004-10-06 . chapter 1
It was not bad. I like especially the part about Draco's parents and friends (the Harry/Draco slash is not my thing, but it was really subtle)
Lkjhgfdsa 2004-09-11 . chapter 1
-gapes-

...

Uh... m-merp?

That was good, to say the least, and the angst offset the sappiness. I LOVED your vocabulary and your characterization (and your review - it gave me the giggles -cuddles chocolate Tom-).

"Pansy and Blaise are family friends. They are /required/ to be sad for me." That line was brilliant. There are so many layers to it; eg. {They're not friends}, {I'm snarky}, {exasperation}, {wit}, {certain amount of whininess which is cute since it's Dwakey}.

I liked your angst, and your overall plot. =D

Lovely work - more soon? Please? I'll update if you write something... -mutter- stupid school always in the way of my goals...
Vespalady 2004-08-16 . chapter 1
Oh i loved it don't worry it's really well written for sure better then any of my stories but keep up the good work please update soon i had evil cliff hangers thanks!
anarchy-burger 2004-08-05 . chapter 1
That was really nice. I loved it.
Inylan Ledding 2004-07-24 . chapter 1
Oh, please o please o please write more! That was blody wonderful! De-lovely! Hermoso! Erm, laying off the spanish now . . .

Poor Draco! We all have it in for that kid . . . mqyb Harry can help a bit. :)
Anis Nyari 2004-07-23 . chapter 1
I really like this one...It's wonderfully unique
ShamefulDesire 2004-07-20 . chapter 1
Wow! That was really good. You wrote this really well everything came out smoothly. I would not have Harry and Draco just jump into a relationship with one another. You should have them become friends and take things slowly. You’re off to a great start. Sorry I could not be of more help, but everything is excellent so far. Update soon! ^_^*
Terriah 2004-07-18 . chapter 1
aw am i scentin a little slash here!?very good!i luv oneshots!
Rider-of-Rohan23 2004-07-18 . chapter 1
ooh. that was all twisted and stuff. I like it. :D I like to think of Draco as loving his mother a lot. I started a fic about it, but never finished it. youve inspired me to. but I still probably won't. great job!
(*Austin
Romanticxnight 2004-07-18 . chapter 1
thats a really good story! you should contine.
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