I really love some of the prose in this. It lacks plot, in a way, but it's different. I enjoyed reading it. It doesn't feel over, though I assume it is.

Thanks for sharing.

i like your story a lot. nicely worded and paced. cant wait to see how things continue to play out. :)

gao...im not one to cwy...ok..maybe i am..but only with stowies like diz!! peash continue it!! T~T..i wubbed it!! plz do continue it...

This chapter made me cry!
This better not be the end or i might throw a hissy fit like a fice year old!

God that was beautiful!
I meant no disrespect to god.
It nearly brought me to tears...

*cries*
That was so sad! Oh man, this fic is just wonderful. All the right emotions, they're both in-character (applause)
I love it! Too bad this was either the last chapter or you just didn't come back. Either way, it's perfect!

Beautiful and emotional.

so good, I'll read the other chapters later! Awesome so far!

Beautiful. Even though I'd love to see you continue this, the ending as it is now is very fitting. Love it. ♥

Oh loved, can't wait for the next up date

AH! jesus christ this fanfic gave me goose bumbs haha it was really really good, and I really want to write more and tell you how in love with it i am... but I gotta get off the computer unfortunately.. so I'll be back tomorrow to comment fully update though My god why haven't you?

wow this is such a good story! i couldn't help but notice though that it's been a LONG time since your last update. do you plan to continue? please do it truly is very good.
~Lionness~

Too beautiful for words

My god, that was intense. Amazing, that's what this is, an amazing work of art.

Amazing. Simply amazing.