very good. Couldve been a bit longer though, but thoroughly enjoyable.

ok that was good, but I think there would be another story to fill in the blanks.

Q? ok that I didn't see coming.

kinda interesting with the whole flaming skull bit.

Good writing! Nice concept! I'm not sure the original Enterprise would do much against the Voyager, but that's just my thinking. Otherwise, it's a nice approach on an interesting story. Keep it up!

I loved it! It was really good. I could not stop reading it. There is a couple of things I am pondering though. One, was seven ok after Spock made her unconscious? Two, what happened to Q? Otherwise it was really good!

Um . . . intresting . . . also the ultimate use the the quick fix. And I saw no use of emotional depth. Nor did you bother to really get into the story. It was like you wanted it to be over, so you quickly explained what was wrong, and fixed it all.
You never even explained how William Decker got the way he was. Or why Q didn't just take them back in time, so it never happened.

Or what happened to Seven.

While it was a great plot line, there were many plot holes. They're easily fixed. Though for an early attempt at fic writing, it's pretty good.

One word... WOW... WOW...

Professor Vine

ultimateguy, I take your question as a supreme compliment. In answer, I have to admit that I am not a professional. I read about fanfiction.net in an article of a magazine and realized I had some ideas to express. Ever since then, I have enjoyed flexing my imagination here. Thank you all for reading and reviewing my work.

Pretty cool. Are you a professional author?

That was great! I'm glad they got home! I LOVE this story! :) I hope you write more Star Trek stories!

I love it so far! I'm putting it in my favorites, but I can't read the rest for awhile. I have to make dinner. BLAH(not that I don't like dinner. I just don't like MAKING it). I promise that I will read the rest ASAP. :)

Hey Tom!

It's KEV! I'm going sleepy now...I will read this... Really

KEV!

great! thats all i have to say.. congrats to the writer

Excellent! A very good beginning to what sounds like a great story - can't wait to read more!