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ox-cab 5/23/06 . chapter 1
nice _ vageta is my fav' dbz
BlindSword 9/29/04 . chapter 1
Excelent poem! *gives you a thumbs up*

It really describes Vegeta perfectly.

Keep it up!

PunkOnna :p
KaniShikamaru 8/9/03 . chapter 1
Hn...

This poem described Vegeta very well...he's always been my favorite chara. _

KR
Piccolo's Love Slave 7/29/03 . chapter 1
Perfectly discribes Vegeta! Wonderful poem, Cyndi!
Surreptitious Chi X 10/4/01 . chapter 1
Aww...You know, I always somehow got the impression that Vegeta had an odd un-knowledge about stuff. I don't know how else I'm gonna say it, but yeah, innocent is something you could pin to him, even though all the rest of the Z fighters are laughing right now, and Vegeta is threatening to blast them because both of us wrote that Vegeta was innocent. Oh well. He IS. _ That was good stuff.
Kittioto 7/26/01 . chapter 1
I hate Vegeta. I'm sorry, and I don't know why I bothered reading this because I loath him so much... but I really hate him. _ (Please don't hurt me Veggie lovers!) Although this poem is very true... so I'll give you much credit for that.
Vindali 5/23/01 . chapter 1
That was really good. I really like ur writing. How do u come up with this stuff?
Shinisin 11/14/00 . chapter 1
Expand. Now. PLEASE! The idea at the end of the poem would be sooooo good in a fanfic
TeaLeavesGreen 8/11/00 . chapter 1
OOoooooo I like...hehe, I guess that's what Bulma found, eh? (sorry, B?V Otaku) Piccolo's a hottie, gottgobye
death by caring 7/21/00 . chapter 1
Nice Little Short Poem
Maliki 6/10/00 . chapter 1
Oooh...deep..please write more like this...i love yer work!
Kat 4/27/00 . chapter 1
Very good ) A good description of our Saiya-jin Prince. Would you mind if I posted some of your work on my website? My email address is and my URL is http:/members.xoom.com/KatsWorld3/

I'd really appreciate it if you would allow me to share your wonderful fanfiction with my website's visitors.

Arigatou!
guess 4/23/00 . chapter 1
bull ,you made him a wuzzzzzzzzzzzzz ,god damnit
Saiyajin Horse 4/19/00 . chapter 1
Oh wow, I love this poem! It is absolutly great! Man, you're good
Chelsee 4/19/00 . chapter 1
Oh, just the way I like a poem! Short an' sweet! Gotta love that tail!
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