 ox-cab 5/23/06 . chapter 1 nice _ vageta is my fav' dbz |
 BlindSword 9/29/04 . chapter 1Excelent poem! *gives you a thumbs up*
It really describes Vegeta perfectly.
Keep it up!
PunkOnna :p |
 KaniShikamaru 8/9/03 . chapter 1Hn...
This poem described Vegeta very well...he's always been my favorite chara. _
KR |
 Piccolo's Love Slave 7/29/03 . chapter 1Perfectly discribes Vegeta! Wonderful poem, Cyndi! |
 Surreptitious Chi X 10/4/01 . chapter 1Aww...You know, I always somehow got the impression that Vegeta had an odd un-knowledge about stuff. I don't know how else I'm gonna say it, but yeah, innocent is something you could pin to him, even though all the rest of the Z fighters are laughing right now, and Vegeta is threatening to blast them because both of us wrote that Vegeta was innocent. Oh well. He IS. _ That was good stuff. |
 Kittioto 7/26/01 . chapter 1I hate Vegeta. I'm sorry, and I don't know why I bothered reading this because I loath him so much... but I really hate him. _ (Please don't hurt me Veggie lovers!) Although this poem is very true... so I'll give you much credit for that. |
 Vindali 5/23/01 . chapter 1That was really good. I really like ur writing. How do u come up with this stuff? |
 Shinisin 11/14/00 . chapter 1Expand. Now. PLEASE! The idea at the end of the poem would be sooooo good in a fanfic |
 TeaLeavesGreen 8/11/00 . chapter 1OOoooooo I like...hehe, I guess that's what Bulma found, eh? (sorry, B?V Otaku) Piccolo's a hottie, gottgobye |
 death by caring 7/21/00 . chapter 1Nice Little Short Poem |
 Maliki 6/10/00 . chapter 1 Oooh...deep..please write more like this...i love yer work! |
 Kat 4/27/00 . chapter 1 Very good ) A good description of our Saiya-jin Prince. Would you mind if I posted some of your work on my website? My email address is and my URL is http:/members.xoom.com/KatsWorld3/
I'd really appreciate it if you would allow me to share your wonderful fanfiction with my website's visitors.
Arigatou! |
 guess 4/23/00 . chapter 1 bull ,you made him a wuzzzzzzzzzzzzz ,god damnit |
 Saiyajin Horse 4/19/00 . chapter 1 Oh wow, I love this poem! It is absolutly great! Man, you're good |
 Chelsee 4/19/00 . chapter 1 Oh, just the way I like a poem! Short an' sweet! Gotta love that tail! |