UPDATE SOON!

I like it. it is very original. keep it up. ^_^

crap... i can't make up a weird penname... oh well. not too bad, but it could be [much] longer. don't trap yourself in a big mess of multi-part fics, because then you may find yourself a slave to your work. everyone is their own worst critic so you're aiming to please others, not yourself. anyway, a short, but good start

very cute! I like how you took a sorta character-sketch idea, and twisted it to hide that fact a little bit. I hope the other ones turn out this good!

Interesting. I liked it. It was like nothing I ever read before. Update soon. ^_^X

I love it! It's really cool. It's one of the most unique fanfics I've ever read. While we're on the subject, when's the Kenshin/Harry Potter one going to be updated? You had to've had 8 reviews by now, but I can understand if you were really busy or something. Update this one soon please! Thank you!

I really like this. Please update soon!!

this is good! continue! NOW! ^-^