one word: PIG,,, you're making her a liberated girl

Rereading my reviewing...something is awkward about it, especially the "my mouth dropped on the floor with 'eyes popping out'." For the my sake and other's, I want to rephrase it...

"My mouth dropped on the floor 'while my' eyes popped out."

Sounds better that way, isn't it? Yeah, I know it isn't a big deal, but it sounds...icky if I don't. X_x

Chika H.

Awesome...oneshot! It was very detailed to the last bit. -_-

But I have to admit I was very surprised when Kurama admitted he had dreamed of her in that way. My mouth just dropped to the floor with eyes popping out. I never have thought of Kurama to fantasized. Either I must have skipped something or this is an AU, Kurama is not worrying about Yusuke? What if he found out? Now that I think of it, I'm probably just skipped something somewhere...eh.

Twister can be an awkward game to play. I never played it, but I imagine it to be. Eh...;

Chika H.

Please make this a story. Expand on the idea and test it out. It can work wonders. I was wondering since Kurama is courting Keiko, what would Yusuke say about this? What is going to be everyone's reaction to this? Stuff that raises questions can become the idea for your story.

I liked it, will you please make a sequel?

I LOVED IT! Kurama was thou a bit more backbone than I thought he would be.

hey i really like your story... where can i find the link for the second chapter... please e-mail me

2 words:

great fanfic!

pls..tell me wer this "link" is..

im dying 2 know!

tnx!))

cool fanfic i like it :)

Very cute, I love it

Nice one! Whe, a good Kurama fic. _ Where's the link?

i liked it i want to read the other chapter how do i get it

That was a great story. The link for chapter two isn't there and I really want to read it. Could you send it to me?

-Jinx-

Hey, i absolutely loved this story! I want to read the second chapter! How do i find it?

o0o0o I don't see your link! o0o0o this bites!