Aw... I love the ending...

*snkrs* Ah yes, everyone's favorite scene! I wish they'd animate the manga but with the character designs of the manga. I love those designs! Well, I dunno if I've ever commented on In Fear Of (I must have once or twice), but I'm a BIG fan (you're on my author alert! That way I know when it's updated) and this was JUST as good and wonderful as IFO! Which I want more of. I really like the approach that Ran's eyes are alive... People usually write the opposite and say that tey're dead... I like your view on it.

Anyway, always waiting for more fics! *nudgewinkwudge*

O, I love it. That's how I thought of it too, even though you do find out in the comic that Ken punched Youji when he first arrived. That must be his welcome. Still, Ran punched back. I really loved this. And I can't wait for your next chapter of your regular fic. This was really sweet. And I love the style of your writing. You get right into their heads, and express emotions. Thanks for the sweet prologue.

What a lovely little drabble

I like the way you wrote this. Good feelings.

I like the idea that Ran was an over protected child. I'd never thought of that, it makes sense though. I like it.

A typo though, should have dopuble checked before publishing this piece. Don't worry nothing big, it just bugged me. And pink lips. that bugged me too. But again no big deal it's just me.

Over all, it's good stuff. Well writen, nicely done. Perhaps you should write on paper more often.

whoa you were bored, neh?

um, sorry...

Beauitful. I've never read something like that before...I'm literally moved, so well told and stunning and deep.

That was really good...I really liked it, even though it was so short...I think my favorite part would have to be the reference to the punching incident...*sigh*...really good...

Lovely monologue. I especially liked Ken's comparison of Aya to a porcelain doll. Also, it wasn't too long or too short. I really enjoyed reading this.

wonderful, absolutely wonderful. your portrayal of them both is so beautiful. *re-reads it* ive been ayaxken deprived for a while! hehe anyway, continue soon with your fabulous work!

LK

Wow. Incredibly short, but a fantastic piece of reflection of Kenken's behalf. I really admire your writing. Very thoughtful, and very well done.

A good piece- I really like the ending. :)