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| xxtranscendence 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuse*sobs* I loved it! Beautiful... Breath-taking... Sensitively-written... I've never seen Furuba fics like this. Carefully written and I think it's obvious that you took the time to think of the flow of the story ^_^ Very nice, indeed. How about writing a prologue? Teehee~ *hugs* diana *adds story to my favorite stories list* |
| l2uly 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful! I didn't really like Motoko before i read this story. You made me changed my impression on her. |
| SolitaireAikanaro 2005-11-20 ch 1, | abuseWow...Completely bittersweet. I loved it. Not alot of people write about Motoko, but you did it perfectly. |
| Urei Sachi 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseOh... Beautiful. Even Stunning. Just... Wow. *.* |
| Ashi-chan 2004-07-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was simply breath-taking. I loved how you portrayed her attitude, as I believe it was dead on. You're correct, there aren't many fanfics with Motoko in it. I don't necessarily think it's because no one likes her, as I do respect her to some degree, but I think it's because she's not really one of the main characters. Regardless, this was an awesome fic. I loved the message, and her son was hilarious - kinda made me think of Kyo. Well, keep up the good work. I believe I'll go check out some of your other works now. Ta. ΓΈ Ashi-chan |
| Jeva 2004-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseGah! I was wondering who it was! *in awe* I loved it. It's wonderfully done and kind of sad, really. But it really makes a point. I'm not sure what it is, but it gets one to think about things. ...whoa...^.^" Great job! |