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xxtranscendence
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuse*sobs* I loved it! Beautiful... Breath-taking... Sensitively-written...

I've never seen Furuba fics like this. Carefully written and I think it's obvious that you took the time to think of the flow of the story ^_^ Very nice, indeed.

How about writing a prologue? Teehee~

*hugs*
diana

*adds story to my favorite stories list*
l2uly
2006-03-09
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful! I didn't really like Motoko before i read this story. You made me changed my impression on her.
SolitaireAikanaro
2005-11-20
ch 1,
abuseWow...Completely bittersweet. I loved it. Not alot of people write about Motoko, but you did it perfectly.
Urei Sachi
2005-08-09
ch 1,
abuseOh... Beautiful. Even Stunning. Just... Wow. *.*
Ashi-chan
2004-07-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was simply breath-taking.

I loved how you portrayed her attitude, as I believe it was dead on. You're correct, there aren't many fanfics with Motoko in it. I don't necessarily think it's because no one likes her, as I do respect her to some degree, but I think it's because she's not really one of the main characters.

Regardless, this was an awesome fic. I loved the message, and her son was hilarious - kinda made me think of Kyo. Well, keep up the good work. I believe I'll go check out some of your other works now. Ta.

ΓΈ Ashi-chan
Jeva
2004-07-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseGah! I was wondering who it was! *in awe* I loved it. It's wonderfully done and kind of sad, really. But it really makes a point. I'm not sure what it is, but it gets one to think about things.

...whoa...^.^" Great job!
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