I really like this. It's a little short though. I personally like the second pairing better although I forget how to spell her name right now. I think it's spelled migumi and her mumodo is tia. I can't always spell, but that is my favorite pairing and i think you could right a good one.

really cute.:)

I'm a fan of suzu and kiyo as well. and it's so hard to find them around here. only what three or so..you can just count them with your fingers. anyways great job

Good to see a Kiyomaro/Suzume fic rather than all those Kiyomaro/Megumi ones I've been seeing all over the place. And this is the first fic of this category, too.

I was looking at these old fanfics, and I found this one. It's good! I'm a little late on reviewing though, heh heh.

hi,

Great KNGB fanfics!! I know it's kinda late for me to submit my review. You know what, it's really hard to find a KNGB fics, especially the KiyoSusu fics!!

mi-chan