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POM-frenchreader
2009-04-23 . chapter 18
Argh, too bad there is no end.

It was so great that for once Pansy was not... well you know.

And there is so much tension... really too bad it stopped like that.

Just in case I will add for story alert.
(even if it stopped a long time ago)
Penulis
2008-06-10 . chapter 18
Heya,

I came to check up on this story. Ir ead it ages ago and loved it, although there hasn't been an update since, I couldn't resist rereading it and I fell back in love with it! This is such a fantastic story. Thank you so much for all the detail and effort you have put into it! The last chapter particularly left me captivated, it's just like the battle lines have been drawn and we are all waiting for the next chapter when the war begins... I just hope you haven't given up on this story! I hope you write more soon.
VenusRising
2008-05-19 . chapter 17
Thank you so much for that detailed reply. I'm always interested in hearing what an author thinks when creating her characters and plots. You definitely succeeded in creating Slytherins who are real people and not just out and out evil like Rowling nwould have us believe. I hope rereading Helpless will get some creative juices churning. I think you have done a great job in maintaining its stride and voices despite the fact that the story has been going on for a while. Good luck!
VenusRising
2008-05-17 . chapter 18
I am so in love with this story. I just sat down one night and read all of it. It has everything I want. I love your Pansy character, she is so strong and real. And the new trio's relationship is so complex and caring, I can really tell what they mean to one another. The House intrigues are fun especially the Slytherins' interactions with Harry & Co. But the best part has to be the Dransy love! I don't know if you are still working on this story anymore but an update would be so great!
VenusRising
2008-05-16 . chapter 4
A masquerade ball sounds fun. But I think Chapter 3 is missing?
princesa de plata
2007-10-19 . chapter 1
I can't WAIT to read the rest of this...and the sexual/romantic tension between pansy and draco? MEOW!
chris
2007-10-19 . chapter 18
I hope it's not going to be Blaise/Ginny, can't stand Slytherin/Gryffindor ships (with the exeption of Ron/Pansy). Ginny was a little funny, curious what's she's going to do with Blaise. Wouldn't mind it being one-sided though. Is it someone from Gryffindor?
Why Lullaby
2007-08-19 . chapter 17
I really like how this is turning out. Good job with the story, please update soon.
Just a fan
2007-07-26 . chapter 17
Finally! Go Slytherin! God, that was fantastic. I personally loved what Pansy did. It wasn't cruel and it wasn't soft, it was perfect to get her message across. And I really don't like Ginny so I'm happy that your making her somewhat to blame in this story. Looking forward to more updates and to see how this all unfolds!
LPFanRockChick
2007-07-23 . chapter 17
emotional pain rocks
this update is cool
now hurry, i want to smack some gryffindors :P
namelessxfreak
2007-07-22 . chapter 17
All I can say is... I'm not at all disappointed with this chapter.
LPFanRockChick
2007-07-16 . chapter 16
Finally your back,
woot for this story
we missed you
doing good with this, i really want to know what pansy has in store for potter
x
Rampart
2007-04-12 . chapter 16
Beautiful.

Update O_O
reviewer
2007-03-26 . chapter 16
Oh, gee, just keeps getting better and better. Blaise/Pansy/Draco, *sigh*, and the plot! Wow, I think I'm in heaven! I really can't wait for the next update!
Hopefully it wil take less than a week, or else I'll just explode, due to my growing curiousity!

P.s. Thank you, ClumsyTonks! Lol, if TG won't update we know who to call!
Miss Anthrope
2007-03-26 . chapter 16
Next chapter, please! I can't wait for the two to have that important talk between them, but probably not as much as I want to know what Pansy has in store for Harry.

:p

Man, I wish that she'd kick Ginny's ** here.
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