This is a cute story, though i think that She acts more like a five year old than seven. I think Harry should focus more with using her name than "my daughter" I can understand that he feels attached and you want to show the responsability that he's taking on, but it makes the reading itself awkward. I think you did a good job with Ginny's letter, and sending Clothes was a great idea. Though i can't see everyone just accepting it like that. All of the adults around him should be going "what the hell are yout hinking harry?"
Its highly unlikly that they would believe that he could care for her properly. Its also highly unlikly that he will be able to get custody of her, unless he goes through goblins or something, since they wouldn't care his age, just his intent. Maybe use one of those binding magical contracts like in GOF where noone can change it just because they disagree. Please keep writing and improving.

Great story.
I cried quite a bit this chapter.
Thanks.

I understand this has been abandoned, but it was a BRILLIANT start, and I wish someone (the author, or even someone else) could continue it!!

lol awesome story :)

I'm realy sad to see that this has been abandoned since I have been looking fo a story like this for a while now. If you are thinking of picking it back up again I encourage you to do so you have a great start going here an I think the story to folow would be wonderful :)

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's brilliant, but I just wish you would update!

WOW! great story, can't wait for more!

interesting, update soon

Is there any chance of getting more of this story any time soon? You've got a most fascinating start, and potential for a very, very good story through what's to come. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

I'm guessing from the long absence of updates that this story's been abandoned. Pity, that. Real pity. It's a good story, and I'd really like to see it finished.

This is a really good start so far. I really hope you plan on writing more! Please do! --AJ : )

Wow.. dis is brill! keep up the good work mate! oh and update soon.

Tnhis is a very good story and certainly one of the more original fics I've read in a long time- very good story! It's getting bwetter as it progresses- some of your characterisation was a bit shakey in the frst chapter -esp Harry, but it's getting better ever chapter! Please continue it- I see you haven't updatyed in ages so I really hope you haven't given up on it!.

OMG! Why did you stop! Please you must continue! PLease Please Please!

Hello, I just read the story and I really like it. I hope that you continue to write it. Thanx