i like this. it has lots of potential. your writers vioce is very nice. once you put in a few more chapters i think you could be one of the top rated stories in the Chicago section. keep it up.

:( This is a really good story and you haven't updated in 3 years exactly in two days. This depresses me. Please continue? Happy birthday in two days...

Great story! I hope to see it continued!

cool! this is well written and very interesting so far please update ASAP!

**. Sorry. i meant review, not fic. Boy am I an idiot!!

Okay, let me say this first. I HATE "the Roxie/Billy" relashionship. but this was pretty gud.I Love Velma and Billy. I hope that u continue with this fic like the way it is now. Besides that whole thing, nice fic! (Sorry 4 the long fic LOL!)

hey, really cool story, jst be careful that u dnt repeat urself sometimes. The thesaurus is a faithful friend when u write something like this. When it is clear that the wrter has considerable talent, and u do have it, and stuff like this spoils the impression. You have an amazing style. This has to be one of the best fics ive read in a long time. Plz continue. Great job

I'm liking this story so far. It's very interesting and I have believed that a Roxie/Billy romance happened in the unseen movie. I like how you've described Velma's character in this chapter and I am excited to see how you create the romance. Brilliant job!

Why have you stopped updating? You're an amazing author and this story is really well written - could be published, in fact. Just...you need to continue. Well, that's all I have to say...^_^

Viv, it's been much, much too long! We need to pow wow some day when you have time. You're dearly missed! Anyway, I don't know how long I can hold out without another chapter of this. I've been anticipating a quality Billy/Roxie fic for some time now, and I'm just hoping you can find some time to at least tide me over with another chapter. You know how the Billy/Velma thing has been getting to me lately! lol (HATAS DON'T HATE...VELMA IS MY FAV CHARACTER, I just don't think she goes well with Billy anymore.) Billy and Roxie are just utterly and superbly cute together. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! :D

This is wicked! I liked the second chapter with Billy all lusting over Vel, shes so cool and everyone should love her, damn it! Even though I know this IS a billy/roxie, i thought i'd have a look anyway. Also liked Billy's first impression of Roxie! *evil laughter* Anyway, not too many billy/roxie's out there so i am curious to see how this turns out, even though Velma always will be my fave, so i will prefer Velma/Billy in most cases! Update soon!
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This is really good! I can't wait to read what happens next. Update very soon!

Charlotte
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And I always thought there was a hint of sexual tension between Billy and Roxie...
But I didn't know there were FICS about them.
And I didn't know there were GOOD fics about them.
But I see there is.
Suck-up, aren't I?
But really, this is good. Billy's attraction to Velma annoyed me a teeny tiny bit, but I'll live. I just wonder how you'll make this into a Billy/Roxie fic after that chapter. But not many people believed the earth was round back in...long time ago. But it is.

Awesome so far. Can't wait till you post more.

holla!

Great story, I love stories were you get left (sp?) in the dark. Sorry I haven't been reviewing, but my *beep beep beep* computer keeps crashin!

See ya toots.

SeXySuPeRsTaR

rock on and all that jazz...