I really like the atmosphere you gave it; seems really Percy-like. Well done!^^

beautiful and so poetic. initially i was looking for, er, smut, but the description got me interested. and i wasn't dissapointed ^_^. i loved how you portraited (however you spell that =_=") them both, but especially percy.
thank you for that wonderful oneshot! ^__^

Hi, this is a great story. Is this going to be a one-shot or will there be subsequent chapters to it? :) Can you please e-mail me back? Thank you.

this is really good!! I totally think more people should right this pairing because it is such perfection! you did an excellent job with it!

i was tempted not 2 read after skimming the summary-im not really into slash fanfics- but sumthing made me give urs a go, and im glad. it was very well written, a good use of language, emotion and detail. u hav a lot of potential as a fanfic writer. good work.