I was actually about to read this until I came across that little blurb at the top where you wrote, "out dere, dis is 4 u." That actually turned me away from this story. If you want people to take what you write seriously, you must write seriously. Abandon all of the internet slang.

What do you mean fluffy load of crap? it was so sweet!

It was sweet. Almost a little too sweet, but still really good.

I think every Hermionexron shipper is pretty happy now, that HBP ha come out. I think we can say that they have something between them. But i'm still not writing off HarryxHermione yet there is still a chance for them.
Anyway loving the story.
~*~NuffLufftoEveryone~*~

Oh, quiet. Fluff is what I seriously needed right now, after a day of IB History and AP Physics. It's made me feel a thousand times better, with it's believable characterization, good grammar, and lovely happy ending. No berating yourself. Fluff rocks. All I write is fluff. And I really enjoyed this.

I like it a lot. What do you mean horrible fluffy load of crap! it was great. good writing!

AW(breath)W~ That was so sweet! :D I loved it!

omg! that was such a cute story! it really was! it was not a fluffy load full of crap! i thought it was Über cute! and i LOVE fluff! so yeah! lol! well yeah good job! peace!

how can u say it was "horrible fluffy load of crap", it was really good- lovely writing

they take N.E.W.T's in seventh not sixth year. any way loved the story.

Oh come on, who can complain when it comes to fluff. It's the most entertaining kind of writing invented. Maybe not mind-stimulating, but definitely entertaining. Great job!

Wow. That was great. Not horrible at all! I love your writing style. I hope to see more up soon! (if there is going to be more.)

I really liked it! I almost cried at one point! I was grinning the whole time i read it. Keep it up! It was fantastic!
Love ERSM3

Stop putting yourself down, that was awesome! Do not undermine yourself, I can see you have talent. There were a few mistakes here and there but they are easily forgettable when compared to the whole of this story!

Good Job, Keep on Writing!

~*~DaisyBrownlockOfOverhill~*~

This is really Great!