Sometimes, it really baffled my mind how foolish Lois was during this story arc. She chose to marry Luthor for no particular good reason. I am glad you let her escape her trulya bit here as well. Thank you for another great story!

Nice job! I loved all the thoughts and emotions going through Lois on her enormous mistake. Bravo!

For one, I love your stories of Lois & Clark. However, I really don't like it when people take the Lord's name in vain.

That's my criticism. Sorry if it seems too harsh, but I am a Christian and I don't like hearing that, along with cursing.

Thanks for listening. Keep on writing. I love your stories.

very good! whana reade more about it.. ) so please hurry up!

I liked this stoey alot