   pencils782 9/10/05 . chapter 1Hey groovey story you should write more trust me that was good. |
| Enchanter 8/6/02 . chapter 1 You should have continued it! It was cool! |
| anti-pest 5/21/02 . chapter 1 Whoa... weird! Please continue this is interesting. Kinda weird but cool! |
| varia 8/26/01 . chapter 1 this is cool! are you gunna write any more to it i hope so |
| Monkey Girl 6/13/01 . chapter 1 omg cool
i'm a hard core Star Wars fan, that was very kul |
| Sweet Audrina 5/28/01 . chapter 1 sweeeeeet |
| Tito 1/31/01 . chapter 1 ok, I have no idea why the whole story isn't showing up... it's about 3 times as long as this, but it's being weird :o |
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