Wow! That was intense. Very bittersweet. *sniffs*

Great job!

Aw, I wasn't the biggest Tru/Luc shipper at first, but now I really miss him. Especially after Jensen, ugh. Anyway, good songfic and love that song, fits well.

Great story! I love the way you wrote it-I was actually wide-eyed while reading this. Vivid descriptions twined with one of the BEST songs ever glued me from the beginning. I love Evanescence, and Tru Calling rocks. I think this would make a great story and, time allowing, I'd read every bit I could. Keep up the good work.

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nice job :)

A very moving piece that would work very well as an intro if you decide to continue with it.

Not actually heard the song myself though have a couple of their others around here. So can't really comment on it precisely though the lyrics do seem very appropriate.

I really think you should carry the story on. You've got great detail and can keep the reader engaged.

veryy very good! keep going!

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ps: thanks so much for reviewing my story!

Hey! I think that it should be an intro and you should continue it as a story! That would be great!

Wow! That was really well done.

great story write more if possible!

Very intriguing, please make it a story!

Cool

I loved how well you showed Tru's pain. They haven't aired this episode here yet but it sounds like you're pretty in tune with how she'd feel.

Great touch with the lyrics!

Hey... personally, I love both Tru Calling and Evanescence as well. I think it would be great if you made this into a series type thing. Keep up the great work!

i like evanescence too. and i used to watch tru calling. but i think you are just a little repetitious with the " oh my love. that bastard killed you. that bastard jack!"

just my input