is this all? cause if it is, i think you should write some more!

I LOVED IT! i startd to cry at the end. nice fic

Awwww.... that is so sweet and sad at the same time! i like it a lot. keep writing!

*sniff* pass me a tissue someone. That was sooo great! I loved it!!!! aw, poor rachel. great writing, write more!! PLEASE

SNIIIIFFFFF!!! Man.....that was so sad. Good...but SAD. :) And that is a compliment. :) I love angst....

I'm not sure whether to "Awwww" or "Ooooo".... It's a bit hard to describe in a single "word" that sense of sadness, yet awe over a superb story. Excellent. I like the gradual build-up to the revelation of what's really going on.

Very cool! Creepy...I loved it! Keep it up! Catch ya later! Luv ya all!
-Maxy Steel

Sniff... WAHHHHHH! I think I'm actually going to cry... GOD, that's sad...

*stays silent for an extreme period of time, just frozen. Finally tears up* WAH! That was so... so... sad. So thought making. So... yeah. Oh man. I have to go read this again. Keep writing, please. This is just... oh man. *sniffles and flies off*