I liked it. Err...anyway I'm sorry for the mistake in the review for I left you for your Nruto story. I didn't look at what the anime was so I assumed it was Kyou. Yeah, I'm a **. (laughs) Anyway, i really like the way you write and I encourage you to keep going! You're an awesome writer and from this fic I can see how you've evolved that much more!

...I...but...she...she chases Kyou right? RIGHT? lol...cute though. I'm going to assume that she followed Kyou-kun, but you probably guessed that! Wonderfully written and really really fun. I have the urge to go play tag right now. You're it!

WHO DID SHE CHOOSE*goes crazy trying to figure it out* Yun-chan...or Kyon-chan 0.0 i must know! write another chapter...or e-mail me or something x.x hotaru_saturn@comcast.net

I like this

so... who is she going to chase? please update for the next chapter even thought its sopossed to be a one shot(i think thats what it said) please just pu out one more chappy. loved it though.

*WAVES* It ish I, Neko T_T Fanfiction.net killed my other account... due to the um... nc-17 rating I accidently had on a couple of my stories... ^ ^; But... IM BACK! and to make happy neko stories.. but... I forgot whyim reviewing...
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OH~! *duh* I like it! It exactly explain what was happening in the FB guild... ^ ^= But we all know what direction Tohru ran... didnt we? ^ ^=

Aww. That's about Yuuki and Kyo, in't it? That's so sad! Poor Tohru! I liked it tho.^_~

Night~Mare
( Kagura)

Interesting.

I've seen all of the anime series and I understand her dilemma.

I think you might have been a bit too brief with your information. I know it's a dream, and dreams can be vague but I still think that there could have been a little more 'meat' added.

Not bad though.